Beatz Of Pain

My first feeble attempt .....
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Casual glance among a swarm
Beautiful ,whispered the mind
Did the breath impede for a while
Or Was that the divine find ?

Heeding to the inner voice
Love blooms wrapped the mind
Little did the thoughts remind
Failure leads to solitude at times

Should the snow cease to fall
Charming breeze care to die
Felt like so when the truth prevailed
Listened and cried to the beats of pain.

Soothing words make comfort zones
In the midst of feeble thoughts
Pierced heart can never charm
When it weeps the Beats of Pain.